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On Hyperbole as a Literary Device

by Charles Welty

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 number of individuals may be tempted to disparage my Ameristan screenplay and its companion novel as being anti-American — because of the massive destruction depicted against our most hallowed of monuments, or perhaps “anti-Muslim” — because the proponents of the jihad depicted in Ameristan are portrayed as Wahabbi-type Muslim extremists.

Some people may be tempted to cry Welty hates Muslims!” or Welty hates America!” or (worse) “Welty is intolerant!” or perhaps some other such nonsense. To which I reply, “Baloney!” Or as the purists would spell it, “Balogna!” 

I love my country. And it is distasteful for me to have to write an essay to explain literary elements that certain people should have learned about in a high school English literature class (see what a public education does to you?).

hyperbole

\Hy*per"bo*le\, n. [L., fr. Gr?, prop., an overshooting, excess, fr. Gr. ? to throw over or beyond; "ype`r over + ? to throw. See Hyper-, Parable, and cf. Hyperbola.] (Rhet.) A figure of speech in which the expression is an evident exaggeration of the meaning intended to be conveyed, or by which things are represented as much greater or less, better or worse, than they really are; a statement exaggerated fancifully, through excitement, or for effect.

Our common forms of compliment are almost all of them extravagant hyperboles.
Blair.

I really do want to love Muslims. Even the misguided, hate-filled Muslims who kill Christians and Jews because they think they are doing God a favor by doing so. I am told by One far greater than I that we must “Love your enemies” and we must pray for them.

The tough part comes not with dealing with hate-filled Wahabbi-type Muslim extremists. Those guys are easy compared to dealing with the enemies of free speech. I suppose that includes the hate-filled Wahabbi-type Muslim extremists, too. But I am referring more to the conservatives or liberals who decry the events in my fictional Ameristan.

Listen up, folks: It's OK to use hyperbole to make a point. What is hyperbole? Let's ask dictionary.com to define it for us:

hy·per·bo·le  (h-pûrb-l)
n.

A figure of speech in which exaggeration is used for emphasis or effect, as in I could sleep for a year or This book weighs a ton.
 
[Latin hyperbol, from Greek huperbol, excess, from huperballein, to exceed  : huper, beyond; see hyper- + ballein, to throw; see gwel- in Indo-European Roots.]

The lie is different on every level.

You will find this statement in the closing dialog between Darryl Harb and Abu Kareem, where Kareem takes responsibility for the devastating attacks on America that are portrayed so vividly in Ameristan. We referenced dictionary.com in the above paragraph (and in the box above) in regards to the definition of hyperbole. The same source includes a rather interesting quote from Macaulay — Somebody has said of the boldest figure in rhetoric, the hyperbole, that it lies without deceiving.  

The plain fact of the matter is that the use of hyperbole in Ameristan is a deliberate “hyper-hyperbole” — if I may coin a term for how I employ the literary device in both the novel and the screenplay from which Ameristan is derived. Macaulay's tongue-in-cheek comment about lying without deceiving counterpoints the elements of deception inherent in the Muslim doctrine of al-Takeyya, as so forcefully described in the penetrating essay entitled Lying in Islam by Abdullah Al Araby, and as portrayed in Ameristan. Here are Al Araby's comments:

The Arabic word, "Takeyya", means "to prevent," or guard against. The principle of Al-Takeyya conveys the understanding that Muslims are permitted to lie as a preventive measure against anticipated harm to one's self or fellow Muslims. This principle gives Muslims the liberty to lie under circumstances that they perceive as life threatening. They can even deny the faith, if they do not mean it in their hearts. Al-Takeyya is based on the following Quranic verse:

Let not the believers Take for friends or helpers Unbelievers rather than believers: if any do that, in nothing will there be help from Allah: except by way of precaution (prevention), that ye may Guard yourselves from them (prevent them from harming you.) But Allah cautions you (To remember) Himself; for the final goal is to Allah. — Surah 3: 28

According to this verse a Muslim can pretend to befriend infidels (in violation of the teachings of Islam) and display adherence with their unbelief to prevent them from harming him.

Under the concept of Al-Takeyya and short of killing another human being, if under the threat of force, it is legitimate for Muslims to act contrary to their faith. The following actions are acceptable:

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Drink wine, abandon prayers, and skip fasting during Ramadan.

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Renounce belief in Allah.

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Kneel in homage to a deity other than Allah.

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Utter insincere oaths.

Abdullah Al Araby concludes his essay Lying in Islam with this sobering warning (the highlighted emphasis is mine):

Unfortunately, when dealing with Muslims, one must keep in mind that Muslims can communicate something with apparent sincerity, when in reality they may have just the opposite agenda in their hearts. Bluntly stated, Islam permits Muslims to lie anytime that they perceive that their own well-being, or that of Islam, is threatened.

In the sphere of international politics, the question is: Can Muslim countries be trusted to keep their end of the agreements that they sign with non-Muslim nations? It is a known Islamic practice, that when Muslims are weak they can agree with most anything. Once they become strong, then they negate what they formerly vowed.

The principle of sanctioning lying for the cause of Islam bears grave implications in matters relating to the spread of the religion of Islam in the West. Muslim activists employ deceptive tactics in their attempts to polish Islam’s image and make it more attractive to prospective converts. They carefully try to avoid, obscure, and omit mentioning any of the negative Islamic texts and teachings.

An example of Islamic deception is that Muslim activists always quote the passages of the Qur’an from the early part of Mohammed’s ministry while living in Mecca. These texts are peaceful and exemplify tolerance towards those that are not followers of Islam. All the while, they are fully aware that most of these passages were abrogated (cancelled and replaced) by passages that came after he migrated to Medina. The replacement verses reflect prejudice, intolerance, and endorse violence upon unbelievers.

In conclusion, it is imperative to understand, that Muslim leaders can use this loop-hole in their religion, to absolve them from any permanent commitment. It is also important to know that what Muslim activists say to spread Islam may not always be the whole truth. When dealing with Muslims, what they say is not the issue. The real issue is, what they actually mean in their hearts.

And who can know what a man really feels and thinks in his heart? On the surface, all we have is his words to let us know what he believes. His actions prove the truth or falsity of his words.

It's Not My Place

It's not my place here to critique Islam's Qur'an. I've done that elsewhere, and other writers far more qualified that I have written volumes on the subject. However, consider the following.

KORAN'S OWN STANDARD FOR WHETHER IT IS FROM GOD

The Qur'an gives non-Muslims a test to apply to determine whether the Qur'an is from God. Sura 4:82 says if the Qur'an is not from God, unbelievers will be able to find contradictions in it:

Sura 4:82

YUSUF ALI: Do they not consider the Qur'an (with care)? Had it been from other Than Allah, they would surely have found therein Much discrepancy.

PICKTHAL: Will they not then ponder on the Qur'an? If it had been from other than Allah they would have found therein much incongruity.

SHAKIR: Do they not then meditate on the Quran? And if it were from any other than Allah, they would have found in it many a discrepancy.

DAWOOD: Will they not ponder on the Koran? If it had not come from God, they could have surely found in it many contradictions.

There are entire websites devoted to pointing out the factual, scientific, and doctrinal contradictions in Koran, and we've already looked at many. The contradiction between courting Jews and Christians and killing them is just one more!

ALLAH THE DECEIVER

The Qur'an itself condones deceit because it says Allah is a plotter and deceiver:

Sura 8:30

YUSUF ALI: Remember how the Unbelievers plotted against thee, to keep thee in bonds, or slay thee, or get thee out (of thy home). They plot and plan, and Allah too plans; but the best of planners is Allah.

PICKTHAL: And when those who disbelieve plot against thee (O Muhammad) to wound thee fatally, or to kill thee or to drive thee forth; they plot, but Allah (also) plotteth; and Allah is the best of plotters.

SHAKIR: And when those who disbelieved devised plans against you that they might confine you or slay you or drive you away; and they devised plans and Allah too had arranged a plan; and Allah is the best of planners.

Sura 4:142

"The hypocrites seek to deceive God, but it is He who deceives them." (Dawood)

My Patriotic Screenplays and Novels

Click here to visit the Ludington's Ride website.For those readers who wish to sample some of my more traditional stories; that is to say, without the use of hyperbole, they may wish to visit the website for Ludington's Ride at http://ludingtonsride.com, where they can order a copy of my novel Ludington's Ride. It’s the true story of Sybil Ludington, the spirited 16-year-old daughter of Colonel Henry Ludington, the commander of the Seventh Regiment of Militia for Dutchess County, New York. Caught up in the turmoil of the American Revolution, Sybil’s actions and choices are shaped by historic events outside her control.

British General William Tryon orders the burning of Danbury and there is no one to muster the 400 troops under Col. Ludington’s command. Alone on her trusty steed Star, Sybil braves 40 miles of treacherous lonely backwoods roads, pursued by a half dozen marauders out to stop her at any cost.

Exciting, gripping, and very politically incorrect with its message of patriotism, youthful responsibility and respect, Ludington’s Ride is based on a true story. It is a historical novel for today’s young readers with action, adventure, romance and danger mixed into a recipe of commitment and loyalty to family and country.

By the way, like Ameristan, the series of Ludington's Ride novels are based on three of my screenplays. I hope that anyone who even thinks of criticizing me for writing Ameristan will review my work in Ludington's Ride to see that I can, indeed, write a more traditional portrait to promote love of God, country, and family. Ameristan is meant to encourage these values, but it does so by painting a portrait of what happens if we selfishly neglect them.

Gee, I wonder what they're going to say about Without Due Process or my other scripts and novels?

Charles Welty
Los Angeles, CA

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